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Give me not your loyalties
Or anything that you dearly love
For in that loving state of mind
You seem to keep quite disturbingly

Biased are the thoughts you think
About that which you love
Empty out this mind
Dump everything, from politics
To religious rites and enemies
So that I may have only
What is clearly right
Not wrong

Opinions and obligations
Concern me not, for I want right
Not what's in your, or my, best interest
Free I want my mind to be
And free my mind shall be
Once I clear it of these altercations

Stay metal!

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The following comments are for "Mind Map"
by xitwound117

removed my writing is
Usually in my writing I tend to put myself in a specific situation or in someone else's shoes. This one, does both, and to the greatest extreme. I actually do care alot about anyone's opinion about my writing.

Anyhow, the fact that you, yes indeed, have read two of my poems and given them (in my opinion) a very good review is very much worthy of my gratitude. I do not ask for a 10, and I do not ask not to get a 1. I am very grateful for the comments.

( Posted by: xitwound117 [Member] On: July 27, 2004 )

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