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Your green eyes glance at
mine blue and smiling we share
our fiery secrets.


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CJ Herlihy


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The following comments are for "Glance"
by cjherlihy

Watchout Now
Cjherlihy;
This is great! Thanks for a great read..Loved it

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: July 28, 2004 )

Thanks Jeannie
Yikes once i got going on these haiku it is very hard to stop, lol! Glad you liked it and thank you.

( Posted by: CJHerlihy [Member] On: July 28, 2004 )

Haiku
Excellent CJ. How are you? Your simple postings please me too :)

( Posted by: Revelation [Member] On: October 10, 2004 )





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