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Maybe I should turn around
And leave this world on which you frown

Smiles fade, and anger's felt
So many tears with have we dealt

Maybe we weren't meant to be
Two friends existing happily

I love you dearly, don't let go
How to handle these troubles, I don't know

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The following comments are for "Looking Down"
by xnumbxlovex

Quite sad. It says alot in few words, and makes me wonder about the what it doesn't say. Very nice.

( Posted by: MzJen1 [Member] On: July 27, 2004 )

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