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I really hate my car broke down on this awful terrain
It's night see, out here in the middle of no where
It's like this place is right out of evil's domain
All I can do is sit here, look out my car window and stare.

Looking around I see all the darkness and blackness engulfing me
I feel like I'm smothering, literally gasping for air
God, I wish there was light! I want to breathe I want to see
I wish to see the sun, squench my eyes at it's glare.

Just my luck! Thunder, lightning, the torrents of rain
The thunder is so loud, such an awful sound
The lightning flashes, it sharply flashes over this awful domain
As it flashes, on the horizon I think I see a shadow of some kind.

From the lightning's illumination I know I see some one
Now I start feeling a chill as it gradually works it's way up my spine
I feel around my car looking for my gun
I must protect myself and make everything fine.

Looking out my window someone is coming toward me
I grabbed my gun, then fired a shot
God I hope I hit you I must get out of my car to see
I get out THEN-------------------------------------------------------

Lanaia Lee

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