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Sometimes,I get very angry,
I throw away things,
I wish I could get justice;
I cry aloud,
I make a pother,
I snarl wild.

But,in fact,I'm very callous,
Yet,I'm utter worthless.

Sometimes,I get very irritated,
I curse upon everything,
I wish I could violate the rules;
I challenge the world,
I dare to void the norms,
I stop talking to myself.

But,in fact,I'm very callous,
Yet,I'm utter worthless.

I wish I could....



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The following comments are for "CALLOUS"
by Myth

don't return my phone call.
Didn't like this. Don't ask why.

( Posted by: die_daily [Member] On: July 23, 2004 )

callous
more of a rant, don't you think, Myth?

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: July 24, 2004 )

Well I like it
Hey I like this a lot keep it up. Peace

( Posted by: twistymisty [Member] On: December 11, 2005 )





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