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So you think your fat, you could lose a more pounds ,
You obsessed with stereotypes, believing that its your personnel goal to lose weight,
It fills me with hate, the way young girls fall into that vicious circle,
The one thats made by beauty magazines, and those models on the center page,
So your a little bigger than them, but who'd wanna be a stick,
You think thin is normal and to be bigger is not,
Girls are pressured. by images and words, they starve themselves,
To make there bodys appealing to other peoples eyes,
They disband there own opinion, only others count,
They lose to the stereotype that so many young girls cannot defeat,
At school, at home, at work, and on the magazine shelf,
You cant make fat or thin the norm,
We have to realise theres a different view of beauty to every eye,
To some thin is nice, to others avoiding thin is good advice,
So lets abolish those two words, fat and thin,
Lets make a new word, one that has a meaning for everyone, unique,
Because to be fat or thin is a stereotype, to be unique is to be special.


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by gturfrey

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