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Can I honestly say I don't love you because of what you are?
I love the damned soul caught inside your morbid being
My love, you picked me out of all from near and far
Were you scared after I found out the truth you could accuse me of fleeing?

How? I have freely made up my mind to enter your domain
Knowing what I have to do and what I will become, I don't care
By your side, no matter what, I always wish to remain
If I left you, do you think it would be fair/

My life would be worth nothing if I left you
I know your soul has lived many lives! But does this imply we couldn't be soul mates?
After all I know my future life with you, I need no preview
I choose this freely, even knowing my future fate.

I know I shall obtain a lust for blood requiring me to feed off others
I know I will never feel the sun again shine down on my face
But I freely choose to be your wife not just your lover
I shall become immortal, just like you, this way I can always look upon your face.

So tonight I shall freely taste your blood
I shall become a bride in the league of the undead
Together we shall raise our glasses and say Cheers! Mine holding your very blood
With you, eternal, immortal, forever, enough has been said.

Lanaia Lee

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