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(note: This piece might seem quite violent to some)

I feel a war rage in side me
My blood thirsts for his death
I want him to feel the dagger of my hate
to feel despair, feel useless and eternal torment
For that is what life is to me
Through life all I wanted was to make him happy
All I wanted was to be happy
To know that will never happen
all I want is for him to die
The one for which my blood comes
The one whose blood I want
So that he may cease to exist
And so the light may shine on my soul
So then come the day of peace
And Iím welcomed to Godís gate
I pray then come the day I am unable to say
I feel the war rage inside me.

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