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Alone for so long.
Antagonizing hate,
Yet, remarkable beauty.
Seen as of late.

Her life like a storm.
A burdened soul,
Wanting to take color,
To be a magnificent rainbow.

Her outer shell
Appears to cry.
When deep within
It's you she mystifies.

So look beneath
As she proves you wrong,
Exterior beauty
Wont last that long.


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The following comments are for "beauty conquers all??"
by reign

im lovin this
I hope you believe these words you've written, im lovin this

Tom

( Posted by: DEMONeyesBLUE [Member] On: July 20, 2004 )

Beauty conquers all
Reign, I am really impressed with this poem. I like the flow and your wording but I also liked the message. Thanks for the read!

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: July 20, 2004 )





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