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Ventricular Accident (a haiku)


smash-me-sweet-fire-blaze
singsong wild love reel, spin, swirl
dreamclasp; bent magic



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Be daring, be different, be impractical, be anything that will assert integrity of purpose and imaginative vision against the play-it-safers, the creatures of the commonplace, the slaves of the ordinary. -- Sir Cecil Beaton (1904-1980) English photographer


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The following comments are for "Ventricular Accident (a haiku)"
by Idomis

Ventricular Accident
Idomis;
This is an ordinary and very unique Haiku. I just love it.. You are very imaginative...You are an
Creative Artist..

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: July 22, 2004 )

I got it now...
I could never figure out haiku...Couldn't grasp the 5-7-5 formula. Wrote pseudohaiku parodies on haikus...But this time I've seen the light and I shall develop my Teflonhaiku!

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: July 28, 2004 )





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