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it's a bidding for a treat
hidden clause of no retreat
like a post-ceasarian stitch
like an ever nurtured itch
there's a craving you can't feed
like a bastard son of greed
battling images of lust
which emotion can you trust?
for though takeovers will fail
pride and ignorance prevails

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The following comments are for "THE TUNNEL"
by shapeshifter

glad you like it. As to your comment, ever nurtured to me suggests it's never easened, if youknowwhatimean

( Posted by: shapeshifter [Member] On: July 21, 2004 )

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