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The solace of a distant and ignored love
Is the dream of a silver lining within
Therefore depart graceless desire
And return me my heart
For within this errant soul
There is bound grateful love
Of the sweetest maiden
To grace this or any other realm
Hold fast silver lining
As my dream encompasses the infinities
In search of her acceptance

------
Daniel Lloyd Kennedy


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The following comments are for "Ignored Love"
by daprdan

ignored love
your new avatar's posted just in time for this heartfelt piece. I like how you use the words 'solace' to refer to distant and ignored love, and 'infinities' being encompassed by a dream. Great, great love poem coming from the one who knew more about it.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: July 22, 2004 )

Ignored Love
Daprdan;
Great imagery...just loved it. you are a great Poet..

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: July 22, 2004 )

Thank You So Very Much...
Peter, since we have posted the pictures, I thought why not use an appropriate embodiement more befitting of who and what I am in this incarnation...

Tina, Thank You, your comments I savor, Namaste

Lucie, perhaps I will utilize this less restrictive form (free verse) more...
It seems more uncomplicated, (not having to R/R/T all at once) allowing the contents visual emotion to become much stronger, Thank you for pointing this out...
I can only hope that it moves the one intended, nearly as much...

Jeannie 45, Thank you, you are too kind...

Thank You all for commenting...

Emotions, the driving force of expression...

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: July 22, 2004 )

silver lining within
Dan, I tip my hat to you yet again. This flows from the heart and into the soul. I've read it several times, and with each read it consumes me more. Very well done indeed.
Reba

( Posted by: Reba [Member] On: July 22, 2004 )

Reba...
Thank you, I'm glad it has value to others...

If only it has worth for the intended...

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: July 22, 2004 )





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