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Do I see angels everywhere?
Do I see them in the air?
Do I see them on the ground?
Do I see angels all around?

I can see them in my spouse.
I can see them in a mouse.
I can see them in a friend.
I can see them all within.

Yes, I see angels in a tree.
I see angels inside me;
I see angels inside you.
Can you see angels in me too?

"I must create my own system, or be enslaved by another man's"-William Blake

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