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I once had a friend
who lived around the bend
And every day i would send
her a card and lend
her my sweater to mend
she realy is a good friend


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The following comments are for "My Friend"
by OpTiCaL

Yo
kinda strange but quite creative

( Posted by: SkAtEbOaRdEr1355 [Member] On: March 18, 2002 )

strangely
This reminds me of a little incident From the Corner of His Eye(a book). Spelling check would be nice. Maybe its just me, but I think it quite humorous.

( Posted by: Furius [Member] On: March 18, 2002 )

optical
Needs punctuation. Otherwise it's weird to read.

( Posted by: mj20300 [Member] On: March 18, 2002 )

hippo
ya i get you need to use spell chaeck a lot especally from "Cait" (SkAtEbOaRdEr1355). and yes i know it is weard i worte it when i was in a weard mood!(lol)

( Posted by: OpTiCal [Member] On: March 20, 2002 )





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