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Your disturbed,
Like the dark seas after a storm.
You watch every flaw with a vengeance,
Begging someone like yourself to slip.

Whenever Iím with you,
Iím beyond the state of paranoia.
To nervous to blink,
To scared not to.

Whenever Iím alone.
You torment me,
Your pictures on the wall.
So beautiful, Skin deep cosmetics.
Your a type of venom I hate to love.

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The following comments are for "Your an evil girl"

darn it man...
Tom, we will have a long conversation about this one...just preparing you!

( Posted by: reign [Member] On: July 18, 2004 )

Holy crap
That was freakin awesome..

( Posted by: Button [Member] On: July 21, 2004 )

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