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The tall and ever small
and wide and I
stood talking gladly, merry music
by your side

"Would you care to join us for
a jolly cod?"
I gave the others, laughing lot a
smaller nod

"There must be better fish to
eat," she said
I lost my nerve and out the
window fled




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The following comments are for "Three of us want you"
by DrKilldare

Turrett
This must be the 1st inthe second time around. She has no wrist, you know.

( Posted by: Codbeef [Member] On: July 18, 2004 )

Ebenezer's dream
Great Abzurke is waiting in his lorry. Go see him!

( Posted by: shapeshifter [Member] On: July 18, 2004 )

Dream of Ebenezer
What can I say, shapeshifter? You have changed your name, and say that codbeef is dead, after,(I think) is a very short existence. Here you have announced your shift in identity, but what you say about my poem, is not understandable. I take it you liked it, since you've posted two comments on it. But why, you don't say. Will write mindless wobble on your next post also.

( Posted by: DrKilldare [Member] On: July 18, 2004 )

good enough to be
could be lyrics for a song, Made me think of Bob Dylan.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: July 21, 2004 )

I am
the raging hurricane, waiting to be unravelled, ask paxelius.

( Posted by: shapeshifter [Member] On: July 26, 2004 )

Fear of Hurricane
Well, I'm not looking forward to the hurricane, I wonder what that rage is going to hit next time?? Thx for support claire. Zz y

( Posted by: DrKilldare [Member] On: July 26, 2004 )





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