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We’re never who we try to be,
Every morning, a new face for a different day.
Maybe a new approach will make her proud?
In the end I find it to be the same.

All alone,
You learn to cry,
Starving to be someone else.
Without a doubt,
You hate your life.

Happy faces and lying laughter,
Underneath you die.
Why can’t you learn to be one?
One person with one love.

Your torn,
Between two people in one body.
Who you are,
And who you shouldn’t be.
Open up,
Let out the fear,
let loose the anger in you.
Be who you are.


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The following comments are for "who you are"
by DEMONeyesBLUE

who are you
Wow! I really liked this. This one verse especially got to me:

"Your torn,
Between two people in one body.
Who you are,
And who you shouldn’t be."

Loved it!
Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: July 17, 2004 )

oh my geez!
It's my poem! I didnt know this one would be special enough to put on here, Tom! You just made my day! I wub ya!

( Posted by: reign [Member] On: July 18, 2004 )





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