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To realize truth,
To find the chaos in every butterfly,
We all must open our minds.
See through everything that seems to matter.

One falling feather,
One loose hair.
All perfected and beautiful,
Part of the master plan.

But to never realize,
Is to die lost and ignorant.
Lying away in some well kept corner of time.
Open your eyes, learn that nothing is forever.


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The following comments are for "the effect of life"
by DEMONeyesBLUE

the effect of life
A very nice come-back piece, mac! You chose a rather good subject. 'To find the chaos in every butterfly' is the line that's resounding here.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: July 16, 2004 )

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hmmm...i wonder if the movie "Butterfly Effect" had ne thing to do with this, may I say, wonderful poem?! Or maybe I am the only one who caught on..which is quite surprising. Tom, you know I like this piece, and dont let one month of in room suspension get to you next time! I missed reading your thoughts.

( Posted by: reign [Member] On: July 16, 2004 )

correction
what is that name 'mac' doing in there? sorry, i can't remember writing that...

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: July 16, 2004 )





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