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One sheet of glass;
A reflection of my past.
Hurt, denial, and fear;
I'm revealed within this mirror.

Hail, lightning, and rain;
Clouds covering the sun,
Can't cover the pain
...only choice is to run...

Smothering thoughts,
Trustworthy lies,
Unbending shots,
And uncontrollable crys.

I clench my fist.
I cant keep within.
Bloody knuckles; missed my wrist.
Look down and my past is broken.
...I am free...


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The following comments are for ""Super Powerless""
by reign

i love this
im lovin that, more so then ne other poem ive read on this sight. its so true to the theory we talked bout ya heard me? lol

( Posted by: DEMONeyesBLUE [Member] On: July 15, 2004 )

hells yeah...
i heard ya super dude...and thanks!

( Posted by: reign [Member] On: July 16, 2004 )

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Holy crap, Cheddar..that's intense..I loved it...especially the last stanza

( Posted by: Button [Member] On: August 3, 2004 )





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