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get around the spelling errors n the grammar

you cant let me be like this again
since when is killing me a trend!?
guys playin me i keep fallin in
girls hatin me this shits wearin thin!
I feel so small in this world of information
i feel so big cuz im lost in concentration
i wish you wud just go AWAY
but i still know NOTHING IS OK
love is like a pillow being passed around
and with this comforting pillow im BEATING IT 2 THE GROUND!
I hope you burn for hurtin me like this
i dont deserve this u n yur dirty tricks!
when i said i loved u i ment it for real
when you said i love you, u lied n it will never heal
Death must be so easy cuz life is hard
can i test it on you? cuz my life is sharp
I feel so small in this world of information
i feel so big cuz im lost in concentration
i wish you wud just go AWAY
but i still know NOTHING IS OK


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Maestroe


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by Maestroe

Sharp words...
Maestroe, you have got something special. Keep writing. Your words are SHARP. They cut through all the crap, exposing truth.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: December 27, 2004 )





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