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its not all finished but i like it so far so listen up dont mind the errors see through it
just his arm around me makes me relaxed
ive got real love no string attatched
his hands start to wander but i dont mind
with our other hand intertwined
---this is truly beautiful
he makes me wanna keep on singin
and to think this is on the begginin
I just cant sleep because of my love for you
but when i sleep im just dreamin of you
i am just safe with yu all around me
i just want this emotion to surround me

------
Maestroe


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