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they that lay in sickness
lusciously licking their lips as they
deny the cancer inside their thighs

separate yourself from their fear
their hate their weakness
they justify them selves by the
numbers that surround them

show vicious in your eyes
let it be seen that the opposite
will not be ended or killed

mass psychosis surrounds us
as the cancers grow
this sickness apparent as bodies
puke, bloat, fester, and die

hate in their eyes refusing to see
the truth in knowing in yours

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