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The Comma Thing In Life *


all,
pauses,

you,
must, brace, it,
be,
an,
insatiable,

conqueror, becoming, stronger,
after,
each,
defeat,

and,
more, invincible,
after,
every,

wound,


_______
* Author's note: This poem was created sometime in 2000-2001.

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Be daring, be different, be impractical, be anything that will assert integrity of purpose and imaginative vision against the play-it-safers, the creatures of the commonplace, the slaves of the ordinary. -- Sir Cecil Beaton (1904-1980) English photographer


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The following comments are for "The Comma Thing In Life"
by Idomis

The Common Thing In Life
Idomis;
This is outstanding. I loved the way that you broke it down into each stanza..You are a Great writer, that is what makes you very unique!

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: July 15, 2004 )

Idiomis;
In agreement with Jeannie, you are a Great writer. "The eyes may be the windows to the soul, but it is writing that creates such windows to be visualized when eyes cannot meet eyes." (me)
Your poetry is outstanding and unique. Thank you for sharing such a mind with us all. Peace, Catrina

( Posted by: catlesfemme [Member] On: July 15, 2004 )





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