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To A Certain You *


I shall resort
to silence
my mute words

Ostensibly
you are unseen
if seeing

The Right One
blinds me
to utter desperation...

There is no
such thing
as You!


_______
* Author's note: This poem was created sometime in 2000-2001.



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Be daring, be different, be impractical, be anything that will assert integrity of purpose and imaginative vision against the play-it-safers, the creatures of the commonplace, the slaves of the ordinary. -- Sir Cecil Beaton (1904-1980) English photographer


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The following comments are for "To A Certain You"
by Idomis

To A Certain You
Idomis;
This is great! I enjoyed each stanza as I read it. especially this one particulary line
"The Riht One blinds me to utter desperation"

Blessings,

{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: July 14, 2004 )





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