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I am the Eagle flying in the sky.
My cries echo throughout the land.
Falling on the deaf ears of mankind.

I am the Bear moving across the land.
My roars are echoing through the land.
I am your protection from mankind.

I am the dolphin swimming through the water.
My language is unknown and my intelligence hidden.
I am the power within you and around you.

I fly, and move, and swim.
I walk, I breathe, and I live.
I am within your mind; I am.

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