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Before i start i would like you to know this may have grammatical errors as well as spelling mistakes, please try to look past this and see the poem thankyou

I am a princess ruling from her electric chair
ruling everything that, isnt really there
Her castle towers the graveyard, her water is the tears shed
She tells what the dead would do living and what the living would do dead
She cries out at night wishing she had one of her kingdoms homes
Their homes are called coffins all her kingdom knows
She never does want to be happy and dance
She just wants 2 get out of this unhappy trance
She never wears colors"whats the sense in that"
all she wants to wear is red white and black
But the sun always comes out shining in her eyes
seeing that it is hope in disguise
Flowers start growing on her kingdoms plains
all the sudden she doesnt feel the pain
Now she goes out and dries the peoples tears
now she can fight away all their fears
she feels a new emotion one like never before
she starts seeing colors and dancing more
now she laughs, but still cries here and there
but at night she still rules from her electric chair

------
Maestroe


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The following comments are for "Dark Princess"
by Maestroe

inspiration
heya there i love ur poem. if u dont mind me askin i was jus wonderin wat was ur inspiration and wat was the poem about exactly? i have my own interpretation but its never the same as the author's. i was jus curious.

( Posted by: LC [Member] On: July 12, 2004 )

Poet Princess
I'm learning to read the poem and not look at the words. Thanks for the lesson.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: December 27, 2004 )





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