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Love: A deep, tender, ineffable feeling of affection and solicitude toward a person, such as that arising from kinship, recognition of attractive qualities, or a sense of underlying oneness
thats how the dictionary defines it, but it is a whole different un defined thing.
love is when you would do anything for someone
If he needed light you would give him the stars
if he was thirsty you would give him the sea
if he felt low you would give him the highest mountain to sit on
You would give yourself to death to save his life
You would let him die first so he would never witness pain
If you see yourself growing old with someone, grasp it and put it into a safe spot, so it doesnt seep through your fingers
Love is almost like a cancer you have it, you remove it and either that was your last shot or it comes back worse.
It is also like a leech you cant get rid of not even with salt.
It attatches onto you sucking your blood until one of you dies
Like a sweet song you get rapped into you never want it to end or get repetitive
No love cannot be defined, its even hard for there to be a word for it.
Love dont ever let it get away

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Maestroe


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The following comments are for "deep in love"
by Maestroe

deep
good poem--- i liked the cancer lines.
clean up the spellin' an' grammar a little and it would be even better.

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: July 11, 2004 )

congratz!
nice job....

( Posted by: rosebud [Member] On: July 11, 2004 )

When the heart is sad...
Trust me Katherine, it's alright to know sadness. For having known it, you will appreciate even more when your heart is glad. You have alot of heart. It comes through beating strong and true.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: December 28, 2004 )





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