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Two yellow parrots
three bells on a cats collar
lunch deferred - again.

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Not the poem which we have read, but that to which we return, with the greatest pleasure, possesses the power and claims the name of essential poetry.


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The following comments are for "Parrots"
by Huni

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A blurred conception that gives a sensation of an entirty. But is always small beautiful? At least here it is, yes.
Regards.

( Posted by: Myth [Member] On: July 12, 2004 )

parrots
It's very hard to make a beautiful poem using the haiku form, (because of length restriction) but I see that you are an expert on it. Nobody can disagree with me on this!

Gypsy, this is a 10.

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: July 12, 2004 )

Parrots
Huni, this is wonderful! I love Haikus and the ability to write them takes some practise, and this is really great!!

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: July 12, 2004 )

belling the cat





Huni, you've done it again-- VERY nice haiku.
We've got to keep those cats belled, don't we?

~smile~


Melinda

( Posted by: Serenem [Member] On: July 12, 2004 )

Mocking birds
Nice Haiku. If only we could put bells on human hunters.

Emlyn

( Posted by: Emlyn [Member] On: July 12, 2004 )

Thank you one and all ..
I am simply overwhelmed by this little poems reception, thankyou. I said if the bells didn't work I was going for a cow bell!! Emlyn, I wonder if cow bells would do the job, lol. Everyone, again thanks, regards, huni.

( Posted by: huni [Member] On: July 13, 2004 )

Bob
From you... that means heaps, thank-you, h.

( Posted by: huni [Member] On: July 13, 2004 )

Huni
I look forward to a new post from you. Anyway, watch out for my new post, I dedicate that one to you.

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: July 21, 2004 )





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