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I love you,
I love the fact you are the only person who sees me,
I love the fact that when we hug we do not want to let go,
I love the fact that we can laugh together,
I love the fact that we can talk about nothing and everything for hours,
I love the fact that you are a great mother,
I love the fact that I can tell you anything,
I love you smile,
I love your laugh,
I love your kiss.
This key is one of a kind,
it opens no door,
no chest,
no locker,
this key is the key to my heart,
you have already stolen my heart,
so you might as well have the key.


------
Jeffrey Lawson


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The following comments are for "I Love You"
by deadlygiant

the title
The title of this drew me in. It is pretty great. I really like the lines you have already stolen my heart so you might as well have the key!

Susan

( Posted by: simone183 [Member] On: July 12, 2004 )

The Key
The key is the nice part here. Giving it away as well is like sweet inevitability. This makes me remember Boyzone's song 'I Love the Way You Love Me'.

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: July 12, 2004 )





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