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what is this,
it is suppose to be gone,
this feeling does not exist,
I am crazy to think like this,
there can only be pain in this,
there can only be certain death for dwelling in this,
what if I was wrong about it all,
what if I can never go back,
what if my chance has been lost,
lost in the abyss,
what if there is no tomorrow for me,
can I live with such a fate,
Damn Life Sucks!!!!!!!!!!

Jeffrey Lawson

Jeffrey Lawson

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