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I think I've returned to Lit.Org. Submitted a couple pieces for the first time in a long time, anyway, although one was ancient and the other was inspired by my renewed interest (::cough:: obsession ::cough::) in a certain Old West outlaw. ^_^ I've been on break for about a month, and with the carnage of finals, SATs, ACTs, and AP testing behind me, I should be able to get back into the writing groove.

The very recent burst of feedback has certainly been encouraging as well as helpful (::showers gratitude upon Ivor, Penelope, and Bartleby::); I think I've gotten more comments in the past two days than I have.. ever in the history of my presence here at Lit. Huzzah!

Ever so excited about seeing "King Arthur" tomorrow--or rather, later today, as it is currently 3 o'clock in the AM. ^_^

...I think I'm going to curl up in my bed and cry, now, because I keep seeing the same type of spider scuttling about on my walls. It's big and black and horrifyingly speedy and I've been trying to identify it via pictures on the Net but I feel like my skin's trying to crawl off my bones every time I look at one. I still haven't found out what kind it is, and at this point, I do not care. If I see one more spider, in life or online, I'm gonna go batshit. ><

I detest phobias. The irrationality of it all is enough to make a girl scream. Or cower under her bedsheets hoping fervently that the tickling sensation on her leg isn't an eight-legged arachnoid abomination tapdancing torture along--ARRRGH.

I flee.

"You need chaos within, to give birth to a dancing star."
-- Friedrich Nietsche

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The following comments are for "Once more with feeling!"
by Jei


I'm glad that you are going to start posting again, It is purely selfish of course, I just love your work.

Seriously, there is possibly a lot of good work out there that I have never seen, but apart form 'random' reading there is no way to find it.

I for one, will look at the work of an author who takes the time to critique mine and I suspect this is the way to build up a following, even if you don't like what some say. The negative feedback is certainly what you learn from.

Again thank 'you' for the excelent work you have posted on this site,


( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: July 8, 2004 )

Never give up
What I've read of your work makes me rather happy. I'm seeing the same spark I felt when I first started publishing here. It's good to see someone else around my age working so well and publishing good content. If you're ever in need of compliments or constructive criticism, I'm always around.


( Posted by: the Co.konspirator [Member] On: July 24, 2004 )

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