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Did Einstein have it right?
That we’d never travel the speed of light?

That mass would overcome our journey?
And leave us with a sense of yearning?

But look at all that we’ve discovered
From quarks to quantum foam uncovered.

Never look back I say in truth
Despite relativity’s ingenious sleuth.

For within the minds of mathematicians
Their lies a formula for photon emissions.

Beyond the line of lights velocity
Does time reverse and travel synchronously?

I dare say therein lies the secret
To Schrödinger’s cat and it’s little box trick.

Lest we all become complacent
Let’s not forget that time’s irrelevant.

"See the man with the lonely eyes, oh, take his hand, you'll be surprised." Supertramp.

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by nauticus66

Be Right Back...
Ok... had to look that little box trick up... (hadn't been there or done that yet...)

I liked this very much...

Anything about time, space or travel... You got my attention immediately...

Excellent write... (where is that 100 when you need it...)

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: July 9, 2004 )

Another great write. I love the rhyme in this. Very catchy, excellent!!


( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: July 10, 2004 )

I'm Glad
I am so glad there are people who understand this... not that I doubt anyone on here is not somewhat versed in quantum theories but I was a little umm worried about the content. Glad you guys liked it :O).

( Posted by: nauticus66 [Member] On: July 11, 2004 )

Time Snaps
as Time stretches
the rubber band...
at some point it snaps

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 19, 2016 )

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