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Love me or Not?
Part 1-He

Finally.. Class ended. Whooaa. I’m very exhausted of the lesson.
“Aaliyah, Venn is calling you”.
I turn around. “Very funny guys, like his outside the door. How come? Stop playing around”. Venn, hay! It’s been 3 years since he talk to me. I could still remember the way Venn and me talk about our favorite artist and songs. We often laugh because of his corny jokes. We often share books because he doesn’t have one… But that’s still first year. I really have a crush on Venn, I told some of my friends. On the next day, Venn knows about it. All the first years in our school, knows about it. Many girls like Venn. Some of them often follow him. My first year was mess up because I’ve been a vulgar telling my friends about how I feel. I really shouldn’t tell them. It’s very funny, even though Venn knows about it. I’m still happy. I’m happy because he already knows. But the sad part is he didn’t like me. He like Anne Corpus, at first I felt angry. But I realize why should I? It’s his right to love other. Besides Anne and I are good friends.
One time Anne approaches me. “Ayah, how come? I wish were we could still be close like before. It’s funny we often share secrets before. ..I know you are angry of me?”
“Hey, Anne! That’s not true. Why should I? You haven’t done anything. Stop that!” Anne keeps on aggravating me for 2 days now. “I tried to talk to you last time, but you are with your friends. I can’t interrupt when you are having fun”. “Yah I know you are angry with me”. Conversation repeats itself. Anne keeps on bugging me. Weeks after, Anne and I catch up, we haven’t talk seriously but she and I greet each other often. Anne is Venn’s (JS promenade) partner. That time I felt diminutive. She’s very beautiful. Compared to me, my hairs messed up. She’s wearing this pink shiny dress. Both of them dancing in the dance floor. I know Anne like Venn. But she just keeps on saying NO because of me. That night, I want to cry. I hate Venn!
Looking in the next table, Sonny’s very lonely too. Sonny is one of the guys I admire. His very funny and very handsome too. Sonny’s ex-girlfriend is on the dance floor with her new boyfriend, which on the other hand is her (JS promenade) partner.
Its sad seeing your love one with other.
“Ayah!!! Ayah!!! I know your thinking about Venn..Shhh.. Stop that! Ayy!” Other replied “Venn again, Sonny still there!” Smirking, “She don’t like Sonny, she likes French Bread!!!” (French Bread-a code name for my ultimate crush) “You guys! Stop saying bad words. I AM NOT THINKING OF Venn and Sonny. Well except for French Bread”. We all laugh. My friends are one of the special people in my life. They often make me laugh. Where in a bus right now. Where going to Itsumaru High School. It’s been two months seen a basketball league started. Our school always wins. Except when Hourinko High School comes in. Hourinko is the school French Bread attends. French Bread is my friend. We often talk, French Bread and I are very close. The real name of French Bread is Christian Eric Vogelweith. Very athletic and very handsome man. His in to any kind of sports. His ALSO SWEET. Any girls would like French Bread… Well, I also have a crush on French Bread. .. Because he always make me smile.
-Bus stop, I saw a banner- Inter High League 2003-2004…


The following comments are for "Love me or Not (Part 1)"
by Aaliyah

"Love me or Not (Part 1)
Nothing works gramatically but you're walking across the water anyways. Hurry with part 2.

( Posted by: imagecarver [Member] On: January 1, 2005 )

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