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Time to move on,
The love is gone.

I'm all alone on this sinking boat,
There is very little faith or hope to float.

------
John K Brewster
"Willows whiten, aspens quiver, little breezes dusk and shiver"- Lord Tennyson


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by johnb79

sinking boat
short and to the point..I hope you made your way to a shore of new love :)



Hiba

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: October 26, 2005 )





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