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This is actually my first time to write anything other than poetry on this site. hope you like this.
The time had come; the seniors were running away from the unseen enemy through the hallway. They were sure of his existence though. For they were told that there was a time to come when they would come face to face with their greatest fear, a time when their tears would flood the school, A time where you'd hear their earsplitting squeals from far away. And that time had come; the tension and the heat were unbearable, for they knew that taking the wrong step, or taking just one wrong decision can probably wreck their whole lives. Taking a gulp of air, and saying a quick prayer, they prepare for...their final exams.


The following comments are for "just read it, it's really short"
by seniorme

The time has come!

Grabbed me from the start and made me want to know what was happening. Nice conclusion...left me smiling(and remembering).

Well Done,


( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: July 5, 2004 )

ivor and tinalouise
glad you liked it, thanks for the comments

( Posted by: seniorme [Member] On: July 5, 2004 )

This is different from what you have been giving us lately!! But it is still a good piece of work. Sure brings memories of graduating!! Good Job.

( Posted by: Serendipity [Member] On: July 5, 2004 )

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