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it seems that i miss the things i hate the most
lost inside my head. i would be wise, keep nothing close.
i know that life's not fair
i'm here while you go there
making chages, it rearanges
devotion keeps me well aware

that

whoa, life hurts
feel like time has come to bear
whoa, life kills
devotion keeps me well aware
whoa, time now
to forget the things i knew before
and i find out
i need some hope to win this war

keep friends close, helps me ease my troubled mind
i get through all the lows, but my answers i am yet to find
i take it all apart
lose my mind, break your heart
falling slowly, nothing's holy
find a better way to start

'cause

whoa, life hurts
feel like time has come to bear
whoa, life kills
devotion keeps me well aware
whoa, time now
to forget the things i knew before
and i find out
i need some hope to win this war

all this
rips me up inside
souless
have no place to hide
sleepless
from all the times i tried
and mindless
i don't in who i can confide?

losing everything, its not the same it was before
yet i'm still trying, its nothing that i can ignore
see all you down below
but you can never know
all this pain, it starts to drain
the life that cursed us, god bestow

hes screams

whoa, life hurts
feel like time has come to bear
whoa, life kills
devotion keeps me well aware
whoa, time now
to forget the things i knew before
and i find out
i need some hope to win this war



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The following comments are for "my song"
by dystirbed

Whoa
I'm not sure what to say other than i like it. I can kinda feel the rhythm to it, even though I've never heard it. I look forward to more of your work.

( Posted by: E.G. Evans [Member] On: March 27, 2002 )





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