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Pimple, I see that you have surfaced
on my flesh...
A stalwart pioneer, a brave revolutionary
venturing onto combination skin.
You will lead the way for the others...
...just don't get corrupted.
Pimple! What are you doing?
Why have you released your white flag?
Your poison oozes onto the battlefield.
You invite the others to join you;
you have died for your cause.
Soon an army gathers
waving flags of white.
They call themselves acne.
Shall I interfere with this battle?
With these parasites that wait to explode
to kill others and themselves?
That turn a once beautiful face into a minefield?
I have my Clean and Clear; I could take ALL of you out.
But for now I won't. I will watch the pointless deaths,the hopeless suicides. I hope that you will work out your problems for yourselves. And stop erupting.



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The following comments are for "Cantical of the Pimple"
by polarqueen

Uhhhh....
Different, to say the least...

And as Claire has mentioned, clever... verrry clever... and yes I will have to admit a quasia serious subject...

Cute...

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: July 6, 2004 )





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