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When you're reaching for a foundation,
While troubles are your only contemplation,
And you have your eyes set on only one consolation.

When the clouds billow like a multitude of scrolls,
And thunder cracks after thunder rolls
Pain takes your faith like madatory tolls.

If you feel you don't want to conform,
Be unique and strong outside the norm'
Wanna just be like everyone else, safe & warm-
A soul can predict severe weather storms.

John K Brewster
"Willows whiten, aspens quiver, little breezes dusk and shiver"- Lord Tennyson

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