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Never shared a kiss.
Lips never so much as grazed.
Never held your hand.
Never felt your breath on my neck.
Not once did I know you in the true
sense of the word.
Yet your eyes have told a story.
They have captured a fairy tale.
I am the princess and you my prince.

Never experienced love so profound
or wanting so intense.
Never been so enticed.
You introduced me to the woman I am.
Never knew I had these senses.
Thought this longing would fade
but this is a thirst only you can quench.

May I blow you a kiss?
Place my hand in yours?
Let this longing loom?
Set these desires free?
I am intrigued by these feelings.
Seduced by the thought.
Intoxicated by the idea.
Never is a very long time...



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I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler


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The following comments are for "Never"
by nae411

"Never"
Ever so good gave it a 10...

( Posted by: Charmr [Member] On: July 3, 2004 )

Jessica/windchime
You are absolutely right, don't know what I was thinking with those two lines. Will go back and update it. Thanks for your comment!!!

Thank you Windchime, yeah only in poetry can we get away with this stuff, yikes!

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: July 3, 2004 )

Nae
Nae, I hope someday to see a chapbook with your love poems in it. They would make a wonderful addition to my collection. Once again you grace us with a keeper. Thank you.

( Posted by: nauticus66 [Member] On: July 4, 2004 )

"Never"
...the seductive thought, intoxicating idea... love it, you have captured the longing and intrigue of the fantasy. thanks. very nice!

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: July 4, 2004 )

Longing
I very much enjoyed the "feel" of this poem. Beautifully captured with your words. Loved it!

( Posted by: SinamonAngel [Member] On: July 5, 2004 )

Never
This kind is what I am always watching out for, Nae. Your sensual and seductive poems. 'I am intrigued by these feelings' is the line that's really the catcher here.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: July 6, 2004 )

Never
"You introduced me to the woman I am", and if you love that woman Nae, you are blessed.
I absolutely love this kind of poetry. I am a lover of love, for without it where would we be?

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: July 14, 2004 )





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