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I think I'll fail you.
I think I'll disappoint you.
I think I'll hurt you all.
No. More than that.
I know.
I know my each breath,
scolds every skin.
But I donít believe it.

Its as if ive become
Twofold.
And I know the truth,
I cant deny it (shining so bright in my head)
but I'll never believe it (burning so deep in my heart).

Confusion makes me a wolf in the headlights
and whatever I feel will be wrong,
leaving me to maul you before I am struck down.

And if I believe,
what I know-
I just may be right.
Because I cant soothe your burn.
But must stop your pain.






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The following comments are for "twofold"
by joeyjoejoe3

Failing
I'm not sure what I can comment on....it's beautiful, and has automatically been added to my favorites. I felt like you walked inside my brain, took a hold of my heart, and wrote what you felt. Thank you for such a beautiful and powerful piece.
How did you know...."Its as if ive become
Twofold.
And I know the truth,
I cant deny it (shining so bright in my head)
but I'll never believe it (burning so deep in my heart)."
I'll stop here before I quote the whole thing....great job!!!!

( Posted by: Serendipity [Member] On: July 18, 2004 )





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