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Run your fingers into fathoms of
my waters
and let me open the wound that makes
me alive,
which weeps a sugar lining
in its bittersweet-
when I feel your heart
against mine.

Itís cracked and dry
now that I feel my heart
throbbing-to a reverberating
slowing-as I watch myself
rub salt in so fucking deep
then see it heal,

My banks are wet
but my hands, so
fucking dry.
That cuts deeper
than the salt will ever reach.

All because my mouth was silent.
Without you, eternity will never know
that Iíve been forcing my head down,
writhing so violently,
until I gag,
until I choke
in your waters.

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