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Evil takes a second look
at what it had wrought.
The dead lay innocent
entangled in a world
that perpetually spins.

The turtle walked past
as if he has seen it everyday.
He knows that he can slink away
into his proverbial shell
only to peek out
at just the right time

timid,

knowing...


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"If you have the chance to sit it out or dance, I just say Dance." writen by Mark Sanders recorded by LeeAnn Womack


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The following comments are for "Turtles"
by BevRaffaele

Turtles
Bev;
Thanks for a great read, I enjoyed it very much.
You are so right about when you said, 'The dead lay innocent.'

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: July 1, 2004 )

Turtles
Thank you ever so much for the lovely comment. I hope you get an opportunity to visit my websites... And plaese sign the guestbook.
http://www.flickersoflight.org
http://www.artspoetry.com
http://www.poetspoetry.com/beverlyjraffaele

( Posted by: BevRaffaele [Member] On: July 1, 2004 )





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