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JUST great, once again I'm sick. So for the most part, this is a more ticked off version of "MAKE IT STOP!!! #1."

I've got a sore throat that makes me feel as if a dog is peeing on my tonsils(Don't ask why I know what a dog peeing on my tonsils feels like..)! Adding onto that pain of urination, it also feels like I've got Pinhead stuck above my lungs! And trust me, that'd hurt.

Also, I've got snot out the wazoo! Well sure, I blow my now EVERY 3 SECONDS, but it doesn't help. And it really really sucks. I'm stuck popping pills like a Mob pops(caps)!

It really sucks having a large pill go down your ALREADY PAINED throat, only to be digested and come out later when you go wee or take a dump! Throw me a bone here! It's an unnerving notion thinking about the fact you make be crapping out medicine that's supposed to drain your conjestion. Even worse when it didn't drain crap!

Only working medicine I've taken so far is Tylonel(Sp?). Now that stuff helps my throat! I could sum it up as saying it feels like Pinhead's pin-covered head is shrinking. Or at least the pins.

Pardon me as I go PUKE my lungs out! Hey, maybe Pinhead will come out if I push hard enough......

A blurry vision of you walking into the arms of another - you just walked away.

Pushing a lover to love another. Are you turned on?

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