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Gave our all.....
When our country called
Should of been sparking a girl
Instead of being on the other side of the world
Saw things we wished we'd never seen
Hell! Most of us was barely out of our teens
Didn't know with tomorrow would being
Except more blood..sweat, tears..and shelling
Fighting for every inch slowly making stride
Watched friends fall upon the way side
Now there's few left to remember...
How it all started that bleak December
Graveyards filled with those who fell
Age caught up to those..who came back from hell
Lucky to of seen the the future we sought
While in the rain and cold and trenches we fought
We gave our all....
When this country called
Trusting in it to...forget us not
For we're its patriot's
Preserving freedom unto the grave
Lord knows there lies...America's truly brave




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