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Sun streams through the glass
Finds a comfy spot to land
Fat cat purrrrs content

------
Elizabeth Maksymiuk


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The following comments are for "Sol's Search"
by emaks

Have you
been watching my cat? I like how this reads-- that both the sun and the cat have found a comfy space!

( Posted by: Cynical_Scribe [Member] On: June 30, 2004 )

fat cat's content
I really like this, emak. Nicely done haiku. There's a very calming thing about watching a cat sleeping in a patch of sunlight. I used this image a couple of times in my poetry, including old cat haiku, posted here, earlier.


I enjoyed reading both this and your gardening haiku, they both left me with a fine feeling.

Regards,

Melinda

( Posted by: Serenem [Member] On: July 1, 2004 )





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