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Sometimes I get afraid,
See, if everything is alright;
Thought the lawns are still
Free from the narrowing queries
In your eyes,
No, I can't say what's in your mind.

Can you open the pages of your heart,
That I had written alight?
Can you still play
With my forlorn hymns?
Though your eyes
Gaze at me like blank verse.
No, I can't say what's in your mind.

Or else, you are skeptic,
Averting the bygone fleeing afar?
Or else, you know
I'm in doubt -
What's in our mind!

I'm afraid....

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