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Waking up beside
Her sleeping soul warms my heart
Endlessly Loving

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Chrispian H. Burks
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by Chrispian

mmmmmm *purrrrsssss*
I love this!!

How dear and sweet and simple in its honesty!

Waking up beside one i love is one of my dearest pleasures in this lifetime ^_^

Ju =*_*=

( Posted by: De`esse [Member] On: March 8, 2002 )

re: mmmmmmm
Mine too! (Obviously) .. Thanks for the nice comment!

( Posted by: Chrispian [Admin] On: March 8, 2002 )

Learning new things
Jessica sent me over here to check you out and I am glad I dropped by. I am just learning how to do this form of poetry. I liked this one as it has a really good flow to it. Now that I have a better understanding of what a Haiku is I can rate it :-) I really liked the flow!

( Posted by: kat [Member] On: April 6, 2002 )

i like
i really like this... that's all i can say. :)

( Posted by: supergranny [Member] On: October 23, 2004 )





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