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You left today and I didn't get a chance to say the things I wanted to say
if I could of gotten another chance i would of poured out my soul to you
and tell you how much i love you.
It was all from a distance me and you
But now i'll never know what life could of held for us too
and I'll live with that day to day
The love that flew away
and here I stay, standing here in tears waiting for you to come back to me
because every heartbreak i've ever felt was always okay
the day I looked into your eyes and wondered to myself
is my soulmate staring back at me? or is it just a crush that
would end up being nothing to me?.Overtime it seems to me your were more then just destiny you had potential to be my bestfriend, my love, my husband to be.
could it even be that you felt the same about me?
but it's just a question with no answers not even a complete thought I think of when I dream of the future you an me the love that would of been my future destiny as escape and left me alone in this cruel world with out a sincere goodbye I cry on this same spot until you come back to me and confess your love to me.

------
Stacy Robles


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The following comments are for "The day you left me"
by Epstet1125

...you left me
As far as poetry goes, not so great (sorry), but what I got was a a diary entry and a broken heart (kinda poetic) and I wanted to hug you and say it'll be okay. We can't understand how strongly we love unless we go to that sad place a few times. I know it sucks, but it's true. Hang in there sweetie. Someone will come along who will appreciate how deep you go, and love you like you deserve to be loved. (Mom's going to bed now...)
;^)

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: July 3, 2004 )





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