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There's a feeling like boss
the championship's tide loss
there's a feeling that swell
the bittersweet moon;
gone by its wavesdwell
indifferent soon, this happening sells
we're waiting with patience
for victory bells
in colourful shells
of the wonderful secret
we're going to think it will never end...
we're going to see that its wonderful people


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The following comments are for "The blank balcony"
by DrKilldare

You said it.
a reminder that even the wonder that we wait for is vain

( Posted by: paxelius [Member] On: June 25, 2004 )

I think
that is what you thought I said. This means something quite different, but we are all different, that includes you..

( Posted by: DrKilldare [Member] On: June 27, 2004 )

This just earns you
a quote from George Orwell:
"some are more equal than others" :)

( Posted by: paxelius [Member] On: July 6, 2004 )

The Wonderful Wonderful
The wonderful people...
with their wonderful wishes...
are mainly in wonder of themselves

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 4, 2015 )





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