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I'm all alone.
Not on the phone
bored out my mind. time is running out what's this life about?
you lose the ones you love wake up for someone to hug,but their gone.
it's to late to break with it so i just cope with it.
lost hope when my dad was on dope chose coke over me.
who am i?
not a prize in your eyes time flies live ya lives,
nobody saw the pain in my eyes so i just deal with it.
like your worth more than me so i just stick with it.
Now when i blast out or curse somebody out you want to ask
what i didn't mention? Like i didn't need you before but you were more
important then me too blind to see.
and then you ask me how's my day and all say is fine,
your lucks out you ran out of time


------
Stacy Robles


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